Showing posts with label Succubus. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Succubus. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 11, 2016

Pact of a Succubus

Mark was a man feeling the pressure of the world bear down on his shoulders. Fears of both finding work and satisfying his lover in bed hunted him until that one fateful night. Under pale moonlight in the seclusion of their utility shed, Mark succeeds in calling the aid he so desperately hopes for.

What comes to stand before him in the occult circle is no angel above, but a voluptuous demon – a succubus has answered his call. With her uplifting power, Mark finds success and satisfaction, but what price has the pact truly come at? One should always be careful what they wish for, and just whom they dance with, lest they be dancing alone in the palm of a devil.





Being close to Halloween, I often think and talk of fears. Fears can be good to use and play on in fiction, creating tension and suspense, but for a creator's mind it's a real killer. Simply put, I worry far too much about everything all the time, as I've likely said countless times before. So having something a little more straight-forward and simple to clear my head can really help sometimes.

Pact of a Succubus is just that, and has certainly helped. Not directly related to For Love of a Succubus, I have some plans in the back of my head for the two at a later date. It's a tale that jumps straight into what you could call the climax of one man's decision to accept the aid that came to him. Now as I said, I worry a lot and I'm likely the only one that thinks about this at the end of the day but what makes it shine is cutting out all that in-between that would otherwise build things gradual.

There's a lot of effectively superfluous padding I could have added, but that takes away a good deal of the shock and power in how things unfold the way they do. I wanted the main scene to open as a surprise rather than the expected peak of several scenes the reader has been more privy to. This way, it leaves that door open to personal imagination, given the hints and prompts of what's been going on. There's free reign to imagine both succubus on male and female partner training. just a normal human couple that are having progressively better sex together or where the more wicked turn of events and genders may go. I may be addressing that one myself later as I said before, but for now it hits its own satisfying end.

Rather than dread the lack of those longer padded chapters being seen as a shortcoming, I want to enrich and present fantasies beyond the main show, which is strong and varied in its own right. This succubus has had her influence deep set in this couple, and now's the time to collect payment for her services.

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Saturday, May 3, 2014

For Love of a Succubus (Brother/Older Sister Incest)

Living with a succubus can be trying at the best of times, so when Theodore overhears the demonic woman shout his childhood nickname in the height of self-pleasure; their relationship is destined to propel past simpler, platonic affection for the love of a succubus. 

These lustful, blue-skinned demons come with many tricks and talents, however. After this sleepless night, nothing will be the same between this brother and sister.


First thing's first, the blue on the cover is because [this] is the sort of succubus I was going for. A slightly different sort from the ones I have in Daemonique. These are more 'traditional' in a way, the blueberry succubus butt is a tasty thing well known through ages.

Whenever I mention black (or any other colour) sclera, this is the sort of style I mean too. Sclera being the whites of the eye, having it black instead really gives a more exotic and demonic appeal to things, and again, very traditional succubus form. I can't complain.

But why succubus, why incest? It just came as a sort of story idea someone wanted to see, and after all the work Dhampyre took to put together, I wanted something nice and easy to work on, and it sounded fun. It also served as a sort of test, since due to how channels react to the idea of incest, I've been rather cautious and dubious about writing it at all. It's like asking to get taken down, and/or upset people. 

As is, I can't mention the incest factor anywhere that may be visible in public on most channels, which is stupid. I worry that 'what if someone really likes the idea of Succubus femdom with orgasm denial, but hates incest?' The best I can do is what I always do in putting content warnings in the front pages. This way, it's gotten out to every channel without a problem and won't be taken down, I can continue writing without fear and hopefully people who enjoy it can find it!

I went with Succubus - aside from being the idea - for a few fun reasons. As a lustful demon that practically lives on the energy of powerful emotions, predominantly lust and love, it seemed appropriate that she'd be a really lustful figure, and that her brother would be her biggest desire, with how close to her he was. To make it passable, I've had to edit one or two lines to seem 'pseudo-incest', but if you put that aside, Lizbeth's brother is very special and delicious to her exactly because he has their parents' heritage, while also being a man. There's just no one that could compare.

Throw in the chance to use some demonic magic, glowing eyes and a shadowy portal to introduce a short cameo, and it just adds that little bit of extra spice and life that makes it special and really fun to have written. Hopefully all the right people find and enjoy it!

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